The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given line graph below depicts the quantity of shop closures and openings in one nation from 2011 to 2018
Overall, desipte some fluctuation, there was a decrease in both the number of shop status over a period of 7 years. In addition, the figure for shop closures was increased to surpass than that of shop openings from 2012 onwards.
Approxiamately 8,500 stores opened, with a subsequent decline to roughly 4,000 in 2012, and a final recovered to just over 6,000 shops. Meanwhile, the number of shops that closed started at 6,500 in the first year examined, after which it experienced a growth to north of 6,500 over 3 years.
In the half last of years examined, the figure for store closures was decrease dramatically to reach a peak of under 1000 in 2015, before ending the period at just above 5000. Similar change can be seen in the data about the number of shops that opened, which was decline to 3000 stores in 2018.
- There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce and money is the most important factor To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Many women are choosing to have children later in life Why is this Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 84
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 67
- Young people who commit crimes should be punished the same as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65454545455 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42829963523 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6767228303 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290191932576 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14290837267 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122293506526 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189231235213 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956213199573 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.