The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island
between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

The given chart gives information about the figure of travelers came to a specific Carribean island over a 7-years period between 2010 and 2017.
The first glance at the provided graph reveals that the total of visitors went to Carribean island was pretty high. Moreover, over the years, visitors staying on cruise ships saw an upward trend whilst the opposite was true for ones who staying on island.
In the first year, dwelling on island was the most popular choice among visitors, which stood 0.75 millions of visitors. Meanwhile, the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower, at 0.25 millions of visitors. Summarizing, the total of the number of tourists was reach at 1 millions.
Between 2015 and 2016, the figure for visitors staying on island and cruise ships developed in different directions until they converged at 1.8 millions.In the next 7 years, there was a rapid growth in the visitors who were dwelling on cruise ships from 0.25 to 2 millions of people. On the other hand, the figure for visitors who stayed on island was experienced a period of instability and soared significantly by 0.75 millions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '75 million'.
Suggestion: 75 million
...ar choice among visitors, which stood 0.75 millions of visitors. Meanwhile, the figure for vis...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '25 million'.
Suggestion: 25 million
...staying on cruise ships was lower, at 0.25 millions of visitors. Summarizing, the total of the...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ns until they converged at 1.8 millions.In the next 7 years, there was a rapid gro...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...e dwelling on cruise ships from 0.25 to 2 millions of people. On the other hand, the figure f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00526315789 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54859148542 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8396921729 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901684351084 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510479690219 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443414716844 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072322605992 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452474268366 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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