The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .

The line graph illustrates the number of a specific Caribbean island’s visitors from 2010 to 2017 .

Overall , there was a similar upward trend in the data of all groups of sightseers .

To begin with , the figure of visitors who stayed on the Island started at 750000 in 2010 . In the following year, there was no change in the number of visitors staying on the island ,which was followed by a doubled in 2013. After inclining notably , this figure remained constantly at 1,5 in the next 3 years . The year 2016 witnessed a minimal decrease in the number of visitors who stayed on the island , which gave rise to a recovery in 2017 , at 1,5 million . As for the people who stayed on Cruise ships, the data fluctuated between 250 000 and 500.000 in the first four years since 2010. After that , this figure grew. significantly in 2014 , then more sharply in the next 3 years and reached its peak at 2 million .

Turning to the total number , this figure increased steeply from 2010 to 2015 , but later remained in 2016. Finally , the data for all visitors jumped dramatically and peaked at 3,5 million in 2017.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, then, as for, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68205128205 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47514996157 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.392745981 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126829198541 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547346997995 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674789922923 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991399586128 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900420218398 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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