The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The line graph reveals data on the population growth figure between india and china from the year 2000 till the foretold population year 2050.

Overall, as seen from the chart, both nations are anticipated to see an increase in the quantity of population until 2050. while people estimate that the figure for population growth in china will reach a downward trend from 2030 to 2050, there will be a sharp increase in the amount of population in india at that time.

In 2050, the figure for population in india was 1.0 billion people while that of china was 1.25 billion people. During the next 30 years, the quantity of the india and Chinese are expected to go up markedly. Finally, the figure for population in china will be tantamount to that for india, with roughly 1.45 billion people.

The population of china is predicted to level off from 2030 to 2040, but then gradually dropping in 2050 with approximately 1.4 billion people. In contrast, the number of Indian people is estimated to have an upward trend and continuously climb in 2050 with nearly 1.40 billion people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45444092689 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510752688172 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9687331445 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455900979308 0.215688989381 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208579528816 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13019993471 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298964531137 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124016568702 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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