The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line graph illustrates the population of India and china from 2000 and also predicts the growth until 2050.The total population is measured in billions.
Overall, it is very clear that India grows slowly but significantly it rises to peak, but India starts with a less population rate when compared to China. China’s trend is quite steady. It has a sight increment and then drops down to the starting rate.
In 2000, India begins its journey with 1,000 billion and takes up a surge gradually to place itself in the top with 1,600 billion. Interestingly, the count increase by 100 billion in a sequential manner. But the China’s trend starts with 1,200 which is 100 billion more than India at its initial stage. This had a rise by very little amount. China’s initial growth was larger than India but finally India moved to greater heights.
The china is tending to reach its maximum surge by 2025 then the graph is not seen to be in higher side till 2050.India and china will have the exact strength of the population by 2025. Till 2050 India will not show any signs for decline in the growth.
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- The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...and also predicts the growth until 2050.The total population is measured in billion...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sequential manner" with adverb for "sequential"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ngly, the count increase by 100 billion in a sequential manner. But the China's trend starts with...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: India
...not seen to be in higher side till 2050.India and china will have the exact strength ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78865979381 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48646564932 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0526570674 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26512384919 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976517457714 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101567402566 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190168970367 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106217827846 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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