the graph below shows predictions about the numbers of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates how many students will learn English, Spanish and Mandarin in the next period of 10 years. Overall according to the information, English is going to be the most popular language to study, although the number of students who will study Spanish and Mandarin will rise very fast in the next period of 10 years.

The projection indicates that the popularity of English will rise gradually till 2024 and the number of learners will reach 700 million. In the following next two years the interest of English will have gone down and up, but after that, it will increase slowly but surely till the end of the period and it might hit a peak over 700 million.

It is expected that interest of learning Spanish and Mandarin is likely to increase steadily, but because the number of Mandarin students will intersect the popularity of Spanish in 2025, Spanish will not be the second popular language anymore. Despite to that, both will rise gradually and by 2030 it is expected that the number of students of Mandarin will have risen sharply to over 500 million, but Spanish - almost 500 million.

According to the graph, it is expected that English will always be in the top position. Comparing all language popularity growth, we can conclude that Mandarin is going to grow the most significantly.

Votes
Average: 3.3 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48060636128 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398268398268 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4726828048 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.875 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149684852692 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881586994285 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037361815829 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108314690285 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190223164698 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.