Living in large cities is the aim for a lot of people because of more job opportunities, dynamical lifestyle, more culture event possibilities, restaurants etc. However, the fact that more and more people are moving and living in urban cities, there are developing a range of problems in citizens life. In this essay, I will explain the most significant ones and try to give some solutions.
Firstly, one of the biggest problem living in large cities is overpopulation which leads to that there are not enough available living places for all citizens, but there are a lot of needs for new flats and hoses. There are a lot of possibilities to rent ones, bet usually they are overpriced and not all can afford it.
One more important problem in that since there is overpopulation in large cities, the criminal problems are coming more actual in city daily life. Since there are a lot of people who are looking for job opportunities, there are a lot of unemployed people who cannot get a job and in a result they are doing some criminal activities to get some money or food, like robbing and stealing things from others.
To solve the overpopulation problem, the government have to think about new investments in real estates and need to provide new programs which would let the new families and recent graduates lend some money for buying ones. But to deal with criminal problems, the police should work more intensive in some of the city regions while the government has to think of new working places for more citizens.
To sum up, living in large cities has its pros like more job opportunities, socializing life, more possibilities for restaurants, kino, cultural events and, cons, like overpopulation which leads to that not all have job, living place and some of they had to start to do some criminal activities to get some money or food. That is the reason why living in urban cities is not very safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78614457831 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72380269168 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2988899829 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.454545455 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206487061584 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959017547376 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718874486487 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130984535034 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586373092036 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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