The graph below shows the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
The table illustrates the value for money of bananas in four country including Japan, France, Germany and USA between 1994 and 2004
Overall,there was a marginal decline in the price of bananas in France and Germany, while a rise was seen in the USA and Japan . In addition, Japan generally had the highest figures throughout the period examined.
According to the chart, the costs of bananas of Japan started at 1.9 dollars in 1994, followed by a significant increase to reach a peak of 2.8 dollars in 1995, then it saw fluctuations until 2001, before rising to the end of the period at round 2 dollars. The figures for the USA experienced similar trends but to lesser extents, which it saw a slightly rised from 0.7 to 1.2 in 1995 and levelled off toward the end of the period.
It’s clear that ,the price of bananas of France was not have a change in the first three years , but then it shown a fluctuations from 2997 to 2003 ,then reaching at 1.55 in 2004. Similarly , the figures for Germany fluctuated from 1.4 in 1994 to about 1.3 in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...and USA between 1994 and 2004 Overall,there was a marginal decline in the price of ...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ile a rise was seen in the USA and Japan . In addition, Japan generally had the hi...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he end of the period. It’s clear that ,the price of bananas of France was not h...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...,the price of bananas of France was not have a change in the first three years , but...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t have a change in the first three years , but then it shown a fluctuations from ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he first three years , but then it shown a fluctuations from 2997 to 2003 ,then r...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fluctuation' or simply 'fluctuations'?
Suggestion: a fluctuation; fluctuations
... first three years , but then it shown a fluctuations from 2997 to 2003 ,then reaching at 1.5...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... shown a fluctuations from 2997 to 2003 ,then reaching at 1.55 in 2004. Similarly...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...then reaching at 1.55 in 2004. Similarly , the figures for Germany fluctuated from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60317460317 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51814164145 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5658205198 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203995838695 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093438543089 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922766600804 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143852127867 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107647434991 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.