The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph provides an information about the exports of pineapple around the world in the most highest three countries that considered pineapple producing over a period of ten years, from 2009 to 2019 ( in metric tons), moreover, the pie chart illustrates the breakdown of the pineapple coast to the consumers in the last year (2019).
As an overall trend, it is clear that country A has the highest value of the world pineapple exports in 2019 while, country B has the greatest one in 2009. On the other hand, country C has the lowest value in both 2009 and 2019. In regards to the breakdown of the coast, distribution and retail has the greatest value which is 35 per cent whereas export coast has the lowest value which make up 4%.
In 2009, country B has the highest value of the pineapple exports just over 4 million. In contrast country C has the minimum value around 1million moreover, country A has 1 million.
Based on the statics, country A has almost ten million represented the highest value while, country B has just under 2 million whereas, country C displayed the lowest value of approximately 1 million.
According to the pie chart, the distribution and retail repesented one third of the total while, Profit has a nearly fifth, Taxes has 16% and international exports has 12% of the total on the other side, Import licences has one of tens while, producer and export coast showed a very small numbers 5% and 4% respectively
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 61
- The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019 and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make c 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...ts of pineapple around the world in the most highest three countries that considered pineapp...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a period of ten years, from 2009 to 2019 in metric tons, moreover, the pie chart ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...the lowest value in both 2009 and 2019. In regards to the breakdown of the coast, distributio...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... pineapple exports just over 4 million. In contrast country C has the minimum valu...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...neapple exports just over 4 million. In contrast country C has the minimum value around ...
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Line 17, column 290, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'number'?
Suggestion: number
...er and export coast showed a very small numbers 5% and 4% respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, third, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8023715415 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59173429573 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462450592885 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9104018272 43.030603864 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.875 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.625 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108323584983 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618913038171 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332303854173 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702514195275 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032801651774 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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