The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Given is the line graph depicting the rate of population falling into the 65 and over age bracket in three separate nations: USA, Sweden and Japan over a century, commencing with the year 1940.
Perceptibly, all of the population in the three mentioned countries witnessed a great upswing throughout the period. Moreover, Japan which was the lowest figure at the beginning became the highest one at the end of the survey.
It is evident that the percentage of the elderly in Japan stood at merely 5% in the year 1940. Interestingly, this figure slightly fluctuated prior to still remaining at the same data in the next 60 years. Thereafter, it surprisingly experienced a drastic leap to report at 27% in 2040. Besides, the proportion of people 65 and over in Sweden was recorded at the loftier point than Japan with 8% in the first year. Subsequently, this data proliferated to 14% in 2000 and witnessed an exponential leap to 25% at the end.
Furthermore, the USA ranked first at the beginning of the examined year with attaining 9%. Additionally, it registered at the same data as Sweden in the year 2000 with 14%. This figure showed a great escalation to reach 23% in 2040 which was the lowest one at this time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ncing with the year 1940. Perceptibly, all of the population in the three mentioned count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80919889534 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8627715386 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168771966588 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625591185744 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810364759111 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119334837613 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895867331127 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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