In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, more and more parents preferentially choose home-schooling to educate their children rather than having them brought up at school. Although there seem to be some benefits, its upside is overshadowed in light of some rational reasons.
Admittedly, when parents teach their kids on their own at home, it can strengthen the bond between them Practically, a handful of adults purposefully focus solely on their work without paying attention to their kids; thus, the ties that bind each member of a family tend to be neglected and weakened. Therefore, when given the chance to raise their children, people are more inclined (likely) to take time off (spend time away from work) and dedicate their time to their youngsters. As a result, this trend has the potential to can build a strong connection between parents and their children.
On the other hand, children can suffer various disadvantages from studying at home-schooling. First off, kids can struggle with the lack of imperative social skills. When the young spend their majority of the time at home, they just face and interact with only members in their family. As a result, they are deprived of the chance to communicate with their peers and other people and, evidently, many of them can be easily entangled insocietal troubles in the future. Second, parents fail to teach their children all of the subjects as well as aspects in life. This can be explained by the fact that schools offer the curriculum includes not only a multitude of academic subjects but also the ethical lessons, which are lectured by numerous teachers with different expertise. This can simply create a premise for children to develop comprehensively as opposed to being confined at home.
To sum up, albeit the aforementioned advantage of educating kids at home, the demerits of this trend truly override its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05177993528 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76231744569 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5888266693 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270595582171 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104054310014 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609706441417 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180373190348 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373432552333 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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