whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, luck plays an important role in every success or achievements of a person to ensure aim. However, in this essay, disagree with the statement completely because, most of the people are do hard work and travail to reach success.
On the one hand, determined people should do any thing to achieve their goal irrespective of luck. In brief, people who were living in slums or poor back ground may willing to do part time jobs for studies or earnings and so on. Main example that a famous scientist who sit under the street light to learn during night time after the tedious job in morning. So, such personal are a good example to illustrates how people become success to reach goal than belief of fortune. Steve Jobs the founder of Apple company came from an unwed graduate mother has become a highest position in economy level depicts that strong drive or thirst to have desired goal than luck.
On the other hand, people who agree with luck as an icon of success that, often true in someone lives. Such as, a son born in a capitalist home would become a junior proprietor, celebrities sons become famous even childhood, politicians are born in political family and so on. This inclination most probably some sort of born with a silver spoon, while which would not be there till the end of life or proper destination. Peoples attitude and behaviour itself might mitigate the actual finance or position they have came through born in luckily. For instance, son of a famous entrepreneur in South Australia passing through detrimental effect on health problems related to alcoholism and drug usage, which inhibit the profit of company to the core.
To sum up, although, luck is often helps to open path way to shows the destination, strong desire and ascertain to have goal by self diligence would lead to the real success or hand full of achieved goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...pletely because, most of the people are do hard work and travail to reach success....
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...e one hand, determined people should do any thing to achieve their goal irrespective of l...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s or poor back ground may willing to do part time jobs for studies or earnings and so on....
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...rom an unwed graduate mother has become a highest position in economy level depic...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...politicians are born in political family and so on. This inclination most probabl...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s inclination most probably some sort of born with a silver spoon, while which wo...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...he actual finance or position they have came through born in luckily. For instance, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in brief, sort of, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44629161282 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2354235129 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140476388342 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052059819656 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579792192781 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898983598188 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490384876985 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.