The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

The chart illustrates the percentage of the citizenry aged 65 and over in 100 years of 3 countries: Japan, Sweden and USA.
It can be seen from the graph, proportion of elderly people in 3 countries increase between 1940 and 2040. Especially, the number of gray-haired in Japan went up sharply from 1940 to 2040.
In 1940, USA has 9% of the aged 65 and over, approximately twice as high as Japanese people while Swedish accounted for 7% of people. The proportions of elderly people in USA and Sweden rose slightly over the next 50 years, about under 15% in 1990. According to the graph, the percentage remained steady under 5% until 2000.
Looking into the future, the proportion of population aged 65 and over of Japan are predicted climb over 15% from 2020 to 2040. Percentage of Japanese people over 65 reach at 27%, while the figures for Sweden and USA will be gradually lower at about 25% and 23% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67283950617 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63114342332 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.320792761 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.625 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320985136474 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14237903421 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912753396752 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189574745887 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469896720884 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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