The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%">The diagram below illustrates the percentage of senior citizens
in the period of a century from 1940 to 2040 in three countries Japan, Sweden
and USA.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><b>Overall, the figures were presented with an upward trend for</b> the number of elders in the period given.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%">The percentage of elders in Japan, Sweden and USA started at around 5%, 7% and 9% in 1940. Before being expected to witness <b>a modest growth about that of those</b> and shoot up to a peak of 20%, 17% in Sweden and the USA in 2040, <b>the figure </b>gradually increased from 7% to roughly 20%, and from 9% to 15% from 1940 to 2018. In contrast, the amount of senior Japanese slightly climb to 7% in 2018.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><b>The figure in Japan, however, show an projected explosion</b>, starting at more than 7% in 2018, experiencing then a <b>threefold jump</b> before surpassing both Sweden and USA to soar to a peak of <b>roughly</b> 28% during the next 20 years from 2018.</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18235294118 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.02679252211 2.65546596893 265% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.4926829268 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.318857781 43.030603864 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.333333333 112.824112599 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6666666667 22.9334400587 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0372468756371 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278136685041 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.010571501259 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372990966953 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413270587049 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.2329268293 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 61.2550243902 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.45 11.4140731707 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.9970731707 222% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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