The graph below shows the proportion ò the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparasions where relevant
The line graph illustrates information about the percentage of senior citizens in the three different nations during the period of a century from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, the figures were recorded and predicted with an upward trend about the number of elders in all three nations during the period given.
The percentage of elders in Japan, Sweden and USA started at roughly 5%, 7% and 9% respectively in 1940. The percentage of elders in USA witnessed a minor change, increasing slightly from 9% to 14% in 2019, while that of those in Sweden soared rapidly before surpassing the figures in USA, 20% compared with 14% in 2019. In addition, the figures in Sweden and USA are being predicted to sharply soar up to a peak of roughly 24% and 23% in 2040.
In contrast, the percentage of senior citizens in Japan relatively remained constant from 1940 to 2019 after downs and ups. The figures, however, in Japan show a projected explosion, starting at roughly 7% in 2019 before increasing rapidly to a peak of roughly 27% during the next 20 years.
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- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. 73
- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78453038674 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58853782412 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1294055988 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803799599225 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044987966114 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547276525263 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647742661138 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647701233607 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.