The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1840 and 1940 in three different contries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares and contrasts the data on the changes in people at the age of 65 and over in terms of the percentages in three different countries (namely japan, sweden and the us) over the period of 100 years (1840-1940).
Overall, it can be clearly seen from the graph that the percentage of population aged 65 and over had an upward trend in all countries.
In the year of 1840, the number of aged people in both two countries sweden and the us was more than that in japan, at about 7% and roughly 9%, respectively, whereas this rate was just 5% in japan. Because of having a big step in proportion, japan reached the highest point at just above 27% at the end of the period. On the other hand, the figures for sweden and the usa were lower than japan's proportion in 2040, at over 25% and about 23%, respectively.
During a century, the proportion of aged people in sweden and the us had a small fluctuation, but the trend was upward and more than the figure for japan during the first nine decades. The rate of japan decreased slightly in the haft of the century to bottom at about 3% from 1860 to 1886 and then rocketed substantially, overcoming the usa and sweden in the year of 1933.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38392857143 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44843179194 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7451172677 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.285714286 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131854005316 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691127652635 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071570523179 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105943237225 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727389539291 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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