The graph compares the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK University.
The bar chart contrasts the percentage of UK and International students achieving second class degrees or better at a leading Uk University.
To begin with, UK students showed not considerable differences comparing to International students. Hence, there were equal students in Nursing and Accountancy branches for three quarter percentage almost. (for 70-60%)
However, the vast majority of foreign countries students gained second class degrees in Electrical Engineering and IT whereas the vast majority of UK students gained in Art history and Sociology. (80-85%)
Three quarters of UK students showed success in Electrical engineering, English Literature and in International law, although only in IT they were considered less than half of the students. (45-55%)
Similarly, three quarters of International students gained success in Sociology and Art history whereas nearly half of the foreigner students succeeded in English literature and International law.
Overall, the bar chart revealed the percentage of UK and foreign country’s students demonstrating that there is not perceptibly big differences, but a slight contrast where they were equal, in most of the subjects.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...es for three quarter percentage almost. for 70-60% However, the vast majority of...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned in Art history and Sociology. 80-85% Three quarters of UK students showed suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, similarly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86206896552 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16939303125 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7596020904 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.714285714 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44756852331 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218950742773 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143034904039 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238041949968 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146561717129 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...es for three quarter percentage almost. for 70-60% However, the vast majority of...
^^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned in Art history and Sociology. 80-85% Three quarters of UK students showed suc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, similarly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86206896552 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16939303125 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7596020904 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.714285714 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44756852331 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218950742773 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143034904039 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238041949968 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146561717129 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.