The graph gives information about changes in the birth and death in new Zealand between 1901 and 2101
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Birth and death Rates in new Zealand.
The index shows birth and death Rates in new Zealand. This report vary during 1901 and 2101 years.
We can see in the information at 1901 year birth is 20 percent and death 10 percent. So after both report increase every year but death's number not be equal. In 1901 birth outlet summit 65 percentage. This quiet senior result however opposite aspect in those year 21 percent. There be joyful tiding but not only after year round changed results. Abruptly deaths increase from year to year. Doing thus the two of direction were equal in 2041 after both of number was about every 20 years death the highest than birth. The number of deaths recorded the top 2061. So deaths decreased by the number of births.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this year' or 'those years'?
Suggestion: this year; those years
...enior result however opposite aspect in those year 21 percent. There be joyful tiding but ...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... see the result of Exceeding. Of course its a bad situation.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12609346867 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3891507015 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.6428571429 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4285714286 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221473335424 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872575008687 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695477599135 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17500367014 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735050791607 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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