The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010
The circle charts underneath, describe online shopping sales for retail in Canada in 2005 and 2010. The data clarify percentage of both years.
"Home Furnishing" and "Food Beverage" has same value ascend. Which "Video Games" only growth not really significant in a half decade.
Taking a closer, look at the first pie chart, It observing that "Electronic and Appliances" was the biggest number which had more than a third, In the second place was "Home Furnishing" represent a quarter followed by "Food and Beverage" obtained more of a fifth then "Video Games" was less than a fifth.
However, there was some increase and decrease for each sector market in 2010. "Video Games" obtained a few digits increaspancy being more of a fifth, also "Food and Beverage" had ten digits increased from less than a quarter to more of less than a third. Difference against "Home Furnishing" which had decreased ten digits lower from a quarter to less than a fifth. Likewise, "Electronic and Appliances" was not significantly decreased. It lost 5 digits from more than a third to less than a third.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun digit seems to be countable; consider using: 'few digits'.
Suggestion: few digits
...010. 'Video Games' obtained a few digit increaspancy being more of a fifth, als...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'digit' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'digits'.
Suggestion: digits
...o 'Food and Beverage' had ten digit increased from less than a quarter to m...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'digit' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'digits'.
Suggestion: digits
...urnishing' which had decreased ten digit lower from a quarter to less than a fif...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'digit' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'digits'.
Suggestion: digits
... not significantly decreased. It lost 5 digit from more than a third to less than a t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, look, really, second, so, then, third, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55494505495 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63696837278 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 84.9812332224 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841870519402 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709646082281 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161075057531 0.0843802449381 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118126319964 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172335249855 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.