the graph shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories

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the graph shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories

The given bar chart compares the data for the unpaid work hours spent by men and women belonging to three different categories.

According to the graph, it is clearly seen that much more women work at home without a pay than men.
In detail, the highest number of unpaid work hours made up by women who have 3 or more children (55 hours per week). In contrast, women without children do only 30 hours of unpaid work at home and women with 1-2 children have a slightly lower figure than those with 3 or more children at 52 hours per week.

On the other hand, as anticipated, men have almost same figures for number of unpaid working hours at little below 20 hours of unpaid for each of the mentioned categories.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 587.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48091603053 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23972639784 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0787323708 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272829089379 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16478143739 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537884201595 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159567495094 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502231341136 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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