The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

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The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and
2000.

The given line graph compares the figures for marriages and divorces of UK‘s nationals during the period of 25 years, starting in 1975.

Overall, the British tended to get divorced, resulting in second marriages as the year passed by. It is evident that all the figures in the shown line graph experienced a substantial increase except for the number of first marriages, which always ranked top in comparison to that of second marriages and divorces.

With regard to the total marriages surveyed in 1975, there were below 500,000 people who married for the first time together with the one that had a second marriage. As the years went up, the total number also grew to its peak of about 650,000 in 1985 before recording a steady decrease to just nearly 600,000 at the end of the period. By contrast, the number of people who tied the knot for the first time underwent a modest reduction from over 300,000 at the beginning of the period to exactly 300,000 in 1975 with its highest point of 400,000 10 years later.

In concern of the figures for second marriages and divorces, they skyrocketed from 1975 to 2000. At first, the number of UK nationals who committed the second marriage and got divorced was lower than 200,000 and 100,000 respectively. In 1990, they simultaneously increased to approximately 220,000 before came close behind to 250,000 figures in 2000.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, except for, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9356223176 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55776708233 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3195467285 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.777777778 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236356657119 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112076182475 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760281733902 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171507429151 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735358627274 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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