some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important.
A highly controversial issue today relates to whether the physical or the mental part of a body is more weighty in terms of sport. In this essay, I will look at the unique roles that both parties play in this endeavor before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
There are people who argue that physical health does play a pivotal role of a sports athlete or just a mediocre player. It is undeniable that muscular strength is of great significance when someone wants to take part in a particular sport. It evidently helps us to stay endurable and robust in sports such as a 90-minute football match or long-distance marathon. It is the physical strength that will broaden your horizon of experiencing new types of sports. In this day and age, there are multiple extreme sports that require intense concentration and strenuous exercise on a daily basis, namely: scuba-diving, base jumping or heli-skiing,...
On the other hand, others believe mental health is indispensable in a sporty manner. There is an article published in The Guardian newspaper that illustrates that up to 70 % of sports athletes told that they were in urgent need of relaxation after several continuos matches. It is a testament to how important mental health is in sports. It helps foster and purify our minds when playing in a match. If you are exhausted and unconscious, there is no way you blow the competition away and win the first prize. That is mental health that makes you overcome the failure and lead you to the successful path of a sport career.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, I feel that mental health together with physical health is supplementary to each other. They are the key components that create the heavy-hitter in sportsmanship
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...al health does play a pivotal role of a sports athlete or just a mediocre player. It i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...otball match or long-distance marathon. It is the physical strength that will broa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...cuba-diving, base jumping or heli-skiing,... On the other hand, others believe ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sporty manner" with adverb for "sporty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... believe mental health is indispensable in a sporty manner. There is an article published in The G...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te the heavy-hitter in sportsmanship
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97306397306 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90529812121 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4161040696 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21110357459 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593479171605 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052319564315 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103806659307 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371849515127 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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