The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph depicts the shift in the quantity of passengers in london underground Station from 6 a.m to 10 p.m. In general, it can be seen that this figure reaches the highest peak at both 8 and 18 o'clock with nearly 400 people.
To begin with, the lowest number of travelers was recorded at 6 a.m with only 100 people. after that, this number sharply rockets during the next 2 hours and peaks with 400 passengers. Then, it is followed by a dramatic plunge until 10 a.m with nearly 200 individuals before a wild fluctuation happens from 10 a.m to 4 p.m. after reaching the lowest point again at 4 p.m, it is obvious that the figure significantly climbs to the peak for the second time with approximately 380 people at 6 p.m. Afterward, this number rapidly declines tills there are only 130 commuters using the subways at 8 p.m. during the period between 8 p.m and 10 p.m, the amount of passengers slightly fluctuates before finishing at the same point.
In conclusion, the majority of london dwellers seem to travel by the underground mostly at rush hours in the early morning and evening.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: o'clock
...aches the highest peak at both 8 and 18 oclock with nearly 400 people. To begi...
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Suggestion:
...nd 18 oclock with nearly 400 people. To begin with, the lowest number of trav...
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Suggestion: After
...recorded at 6 a.m with only 100 people. after that, this number sharply rockets durin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then, well, in conclusion, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57880910698 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.845881689 43.030603864 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.0 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 22.9334400587 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933246262977 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596278375272 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388753082091 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809555671496 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375712613326 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.