You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
While we strive to make the world a better place with drastically changing environment and technological advances, there are some major threats that are evergrowing and it is becoming impossible to overcome these issues such as overpopulation, pollution, and lack of education. My country is no exception to this dilemma. It is a global issue and requires significant consideration as it impacts the whole world not a specific country.
With reference to my country that already comes under the category of under-developed countries. Currently, and in the coming ten years, I see a lot of problems rising every day. Talking about environmental issues, pollution is the prominent one. With a large number of vehicles on the road it is challenging to control the pollution. Similarly, regarding population, despite having multiple organizations working for the education and awareness of a controlled population; the efforts seem to go in vain. Lastly, to our utter disappointment, education systems are completely corrupted. Politicians are paying no heed to educating and developing the youth or establishing an organized education system.
There are multiple ways to overcome or prevent these issues from growing further. Firstly, the government should put a restriction on multiple vehicle ownership. Auto lease criteria should be made stringent. Similarly, The government should announce a policy of having 2 children per family only. Moreover, education should be prioritized and should be made available to every child in the country free of charge. There should be generalized and synced syllabus across the country in all schools whether public of private.
In order to recapitulate the aforementioned, i reiterate that it is a global problem that needs to be dealt on a larger scale. We need to be considerate enough to make better changes around us in every way possible. It is every individual's responsibility to contribute towards the betterment and think globally not individually. I am certain that with a change of mindset, we can overcome these issues or at least stop them from spreading.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s, pollution is the prominent one. With a large number of vehicles on the road it is challenging ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
... vehicles on the road it is challenging to control the pollution. Similarly, regarding pop...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...der to recapitulate the aforementioned, i reiterate that it is a global problem t...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...d us in every way possible. It is every individuals responsibility to contribute towards th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, at least, such as, talking about, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38066465257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24588860653 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4385177312 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.05 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171982143641 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478676707689 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378454661366 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927926024282 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030452986408 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s, pollution is the prominent one. With a large number of vehicles on the road it is challenging ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: controlling
... vehicles on the road it is challenging to control the pollution. Similarly, regarding pop...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...der to recapitulate the aforementioned, i reiterate that it is a global problem t...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...d us in every way possible. It is every individuals responsibility to contribute towards th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, at least, such as, talking about, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38066465257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24588860653 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4385177312 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.05 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171982143641 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478676707689 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378454661366 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927926024282 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030452986408 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.