Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
To begin with, it is essential to obtain excellence at what we do and excellence can only be achieved by practicing our expertise constantly without bringing any innovation. This mindset works best in many fields of life For example, a worker in the packaging factory has to be skillful and knowledgeable with the process so that the complete packaging procedure can be executed in time and with quality. It is not required to initiate any change as the procedure is predefined.
On the contrary, the importance of bringing change in anything we do cannot be overlooked. Having the mindset of adapting change compels to explore innovative ideas that resultantly executes the same task in more optimized and efficient way. For instance, a project manager is working on a waterfall project methodology and is lacking behind with timelines. In the same case, if the method is changed from Waterfall to Agile project management, the project will be delivered on time and with quality.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, at one side it is imperative to keep working on the same phenomenon and avoid change but on the other hand it becomes inevitable to bring change to stay competitive and efficient. In my personal opinion, change is the most essential and vital requirement in today's competitive market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...o stay competitive and efficient. In my personal opinion, change is the most essential and vital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1261682243 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03072238752 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3314092954 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133788004362 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063179489406 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354801265681 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956607250167 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336870950462 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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