The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000 Summarize the key features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graphs below show the development of Brindell from 1800 to 2000.
Summarize the key features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps provide a clear overview of Brindell's evolvement over two decades, specifically being described under three milestones, which are 1800, 1900 and 2000. Although projecting land for living happened dramatically through periods, it still keeps the original frame.

Starting with Brindell essence, in 1800, no human artificial materials were implemented. However, just after a decade, farmland was replaced by an industrial zone and a small village for workers called "Bun Hill". Simultaneously, the great amount of woodland was diminished for the larger of crops and River Stour. That is to say, animal habitats have been gradually lost.

A substantial difference between 1900 and 2000 mainly illustrates the expansion of human demands by which dwindling the square of woodland to reach a low record of less than a half. The remaining was constructed under a part for workers living there named "Bun Hill Park". Moreover, it is obvious to see the housing area and place for factories extended nearly twice, leading to narrow the land should have been recorded as a part of River Stour. The place called "Brindell" was also widened and ended up with a circular border.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40211640212 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00223408132 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687830687831 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7241526699 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610045582842 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249160208981 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360020209882 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468625702161 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020035208897 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
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