The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The bar chart compares the proportion of british buying three different kinds of music albums in terms of sex and age.
Overall, women tend to purchase albums more than man in Britain. Additionally, it is also clear that classical music is less popular than pop music and rock music for British citizens of all ages save 45+ bracket.
The percentage of albums women buying is about 28% for pop music and exactly 30% for rock music, which is higher than that of man with 19% and 16%, respectively. In addition both these kind of music are preferred by those who are from 16 to 34 years old and the figure for those people is around 50%. While people over the age of 45 show less interest in the first two genres, accounting for under 10%, the figure for those being in 3544 group is around 26% in both music types.
In contrast, classical music fails to gain popularity to almost kinds of British people. Under 9 % of men and women make purchases for this kind of music albums whereas those of 26-34 bracket and 35-44 bracket are much lower with only 1% and 3% in order. Besides, it is also noticeable that the oldest age group is ranked in the first position and made up exactly 20%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... man with 19% and 16%, respectively. In addition both these kind of music are preferred ...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...and 16%, respectively. In addition both these kind of music are preferred by those who are...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50230414747 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20405564611 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562211981567 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4895220148 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244300900431 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107027474272 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477040317576 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162925703862 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357058778852 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.