The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The three bar graphs illustrate the number of British people in percentage who buys different types of music, Pop, Rock and Classical, according to their gender and age.
Males are more interested in Rock music than the other two types. About 31% men buys Rock music album and about 28% of them likes Pop music. Less than 10% of men enjoy Classical music. Similar trend is found in teenagers and young adults, ranging age between 16 to 24. The adults whose age ranges from 25 to 34 display an alike taste to the male population and teens. They buy 31% albums which are Pop in genre and 29% album which are of Rock genre. However, some of these young adults, about 15%, find interest in the Classical genre.
Women and people in their mid-life, ie, who are older than 35 years but younger than 44, also show akinness in their taste i music. 15-18% of the women listen and buy Pop music album or Rock music album respectively. Same can be said about the middle aged adults.
On the contrary to all these fashion, the older population, namely people who are older than 45 years, are less likely to buy any Rock or Pop album ( less than 10% in both cases). However, they are seem to be more interested in Classical music(20%).
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- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: seemed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52702702703 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13648890826 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3991915087 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145293034862 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552576587787 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448016991455 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105111357431 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484258992211 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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