The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age

Essay topics:

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The information about the types of music albums purchased by genders and age in Britain is illustrated in the bar charts.
Overall, rock music sales are by far the most preferable for young adults and youngsters, followed by people who sell of pop music. Meanwhile, elderly people are more likely to buy classical music.
In Britain, rock music for young adults and teenagers are dominating to buy with around 33% and 30%, running. This trend is followed by those aged who like pop music with almost the same percentages. Furthermore, other counterparts for both types of music are similar, with 45s aged accounting for considerably the lowest proportion.
When it comes to classical music, elderly people are more likely to buy that type of music with a fifth, breaking the record as the highest percentage. This contrasts with teenagers who do not really commonly listen to that music with only a very small proportion. Another figure can be seen from male and female with different percent at just under 20% and approximately 7%, respectively. Also, other figure shows a minority percent.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04972375691 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7218679362 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2264311121 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256448111479 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11079423019 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860416705434 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186985411239 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872863784366 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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