The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The comparison in the three different music albums sales among the British based on sex and age is displayed in bar charts, shown in percentage.
Overall, men buying the albums are more than women. Additionally, the lowest figure for sales according to cohorts was on classical music, except that for purchase in elderly.
As per data, there is the highest percentage of males purchasing rock music albums, with almost a third, followed by those who buy pop ones at more than a quarter. However, the rate of classical song albums sales accounts for a third of the former. Turning to females, that of pop and rock genre are moderately below 20%, then the rest is under one in ten.
When it comes to brackets, in pop and rock genre, the elderly and 35-44-year-old people is observed to below a fifth, while the youth and young adults stand out bigger to be approximately at 30. Lastly, the oldest cohort shows the biggest proportion in classical songs at two in ten, followed by 25-34-year-old British at three-fourth of the former, and the others suffer from a twentieth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81621621622 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69781179083 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9087674648 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193557886056 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074917537892 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044589967036 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115121782736 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427417430917 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.