The pie chart illustrates the information of graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. It shows the average of electricity in england .

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lectricity of england in winter season. It is use the 35,000 average of electricit...
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...icity in england for his winter season. It is a low demand for electricity in his ...
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...low demand for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electric...
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... demand for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electricity...
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...d for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electricity in h...
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...heating rooms and make the heating water . It can be use the 52.5% in the heating ...
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...17.5% use the ovens, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lightin...
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...the ovens, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and...
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...ns, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and radio...
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...achines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and radio . It is use the 15% electr...
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... equal using the lighting , tv and radio . It is use the 15% electricity . It is u...
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...nd radio . It is use the 15% electricity . It is use equal electricity in vacuum c...
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...cleaner, food mixer and electronic tools .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 9.0 33.7804878049 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 556.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48387096774 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61401065165 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 106.607317073 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435483870968 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3520666496 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.5454545455 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2727272727 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278633011335 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150144845232 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120470172847 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227673616135 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148566007396 0.0819641961636 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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