The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.

Essay topics:

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.

The given column graph depicts the number of hours working with people working in different sectors. The pie chart provides information about the level of stress among eight age groups

In the first column chart, business spends 70 hours a week which is the highest among all other sectors. The doctors are at just over 50 hours. Around 60 hours are spent by movie produces which is approximately 10 hours lower than the hours spent by a businessman. Chefs, lectures, and lawyers all are accounted for under 40 hours

In the pie chart, a majority 25% of lecturers are feeling stressed in working hours. Movie producers and doctors are in pressure which is 18% and 15% respectively about 10% of Businessman and chefs are in stress and writers both are at 8%. Programmers made 5% in terms of illness of stress.

Overall, people who spend more hours on work are feeling less stressed.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48006275423 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0512916095 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227499235452 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924933648942 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533848096353 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142346306163 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068045665994 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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