Homework is a part of school life. Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them, while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them. What do you think about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that homework is becoming an indispensable part of children's education. Some people argue that homework helps children enormously whereas other think that it is a burden on them. In spite of its drawbacks, I believe that daily homework should be given to children.
In the first place, doing exercises is an efficient way to review and get more understanding. Obviously, "practice makes perfect". After lessons, children do their assignments to reinforce the learnt knowledge as well as answer the difficult questions about the teacher's lecture by themselves. Besides, 45 minutes is not enough time for teachers to teach all the studying methods. Thus, some parts of a lecture are often given to students as homework. It means if they work hard, they will understand lesson more deeply and get better results.
Apart from that, free time is able to be used more positively by doing homework. After school time, children have a lot of spare time and the activities they often do at that time are playing games or chatting with their friends on Facebook. In fact, these activities are not absolutely good for their health. Therefore, doing assignments helps control their time. Moreover, it also gives insight among students about the importance of education in life. Consequently, they will be more responsible for their studying as well as they will arrange a suitable timetable to learn.
Last but not least, homework is a means of checking student's patience and passion. Indeed, among exercises, there are some difficult forms which only students having endurance and interest with the subject can find the solutions. As a matter of fact, many students determine to spend more time solving their matter and then they find new ways that are much shorter and more creative. In other words, doing assignments also encourages children to expand their creativity.
To sum up, it is essential for teachers to give daily exercises to students. However, they ought to give homework to them in a certain limitation, don't make homework become an unnecessary burden on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in fact, no doubt, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 965.302439024 182% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14619883041 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77670031427 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 106.607317073 179% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 283.868780488 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1405992663 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8095238095 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281072095192 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821337319935 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681496481901 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17616847643 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914179827315 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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