Illustrated in the flow chart are the processes of producing energy by the means of hydroelectric power.
Overall, it is clear that the method of generating electricity through hydropower plant involves a series of systematic steps that differs during the day and night.
Looking closely, the daylight process starts with the collection of flowing water coming from the river. This water flows and is collected in a high-level reservoir. Once the adequate water level is achieve this follows with the opening of the dam, wherein water flows down leading to a rotating turbines. These turbines are responsible of generating electricity which runs through the electric lines of the generator. In the generator power lines are connected leading to the national grid which are then distributed for consumption. Meanwhile, the water that pass through the turbines flow into a low-level reservoir wherein it is later utilized during the night.
In comparison to the evening process, which involves two distinct method. First, the dam situated at the high-level reservoir is first shut off during the night. Afterwards the process begins in an reversible manner. To begin with, from the low-level reservoir water are pumped back to the turbines, passing the pipe lines leading to the high-level reservoir which water are collected in time for daytime use.
- The illustration shows how chocolates is being produced. 78
- Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population? 73
- The graph below give information about water use worldwide.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 11
- Illustrated in the flow chart are the processes of producing energy by the means of hydroelectric power. 73
- Displayed in the bar graph are the proportions of oil manufactured and utilized by the different global sectors from 1980 and projections towards 2020. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...rvoir. Once the adequate water level is achieve this follows with the opening of the da...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'turbine'?
Suggestion: turbine
... water flows down leading to a rotating turbines. These turbines are responsible of gene...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing process, which involves two distinct method. First, the dam situated at the h...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an reversible manner" with adverb for "reversible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he night. Afterwards the process begins in an reversible manner. To begin with, from the low-level rese...
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Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...night. Afterwards the process begins in an reversible manner. To begin with, from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39086294416 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68416105227 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8621953432 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806770373267 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409323236169 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351977188951 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463860219885 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402983153256 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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