The illustration shows how chocolates is being produced.
Displayed in the diagram are the processes of how chocolates are made.
Overall, it can be observed that the methods of manufacturing dark chocolates involves ten systematic steps.
The procedure begins in countries’ such as South America, Africa, and Indonesia, where cacao farms are situated. In these farms ripe red cacao pods are carefully selected in every tree. After harvesting, white cacao bean are collected through slicing the pods in half. then the third step starts with placing all the gathered white beans into a large rectangular container that are left to ferment. Thereafter, fermented beans go through the drying process wherein the beans are spread out evenly in a rectangular shaped receptacle and are then laid under the heating sun to ensure that all moisture are stripped out of the beans. Once dried, the beans are stored in huge sacks and is now ready for transport to the respective factories.
Upon arrival to the factory, the dried sacks of cacao beans are then subjected for roasting. In this stage beans are baked in a high temperature oven. then the roasted beans are brought to the grinning section, wherein, beans are crushed in to tiny pieces cracking open its outer shells. The shells are then sorted out and are discarded. The last stage then follows with the pressing of the bean’s inner layer. The beans turns into liquid and the by product are the chocolates.
- Displayed in the bar graph are the proportions of oil manufactured and utilized by the different global sectors from 1980 and projections towards 2020. 89
- The graph below give information about water use worldwide.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 11
- The illustration shows how chocolates is being produced. 78
- Illustrated in the flow chart are the processes of producing energy by the means of hydroelectric power. 73
- Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07234042553 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58632402809 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5801273563 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509888884449 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241621024241 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604738136618 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845673584843 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877010521158 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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