illustrates the data given by the Statistics Office of an application called Duolingo published in July 2020

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illustrates the data given by the Statistics Office of an application called Duolingo, published in July 2020

The diagram illustrates the data given by the Statistics Office of an application called Duolingo, published in July 2020. Specifically, the figures stated the countries with a wide-reaching number of users, calculated the percentage in three platforms applying by users, and some popular languages that are cultivated in this application.
In fact, Duolingo is being used by 10 million people all over the world. Accordingly, a very large number numbers of learners are from 6 countries, nominated the USA, Brazil, Mexico, France, UK, and Italy. In July 2020, the rate of the USA was reached its peak among the 6 countries, with 25.8%, equivalent to 2.6 million users. Nevertheless, the bottom two rates of users are owned by the UK and Italy, make up 5.2% and 5.1%, corresponding to 520.000 and 510.000 users sequentially.
Following this, the diagram shows the rate of users according to the three technological platforms that they used. As can be seen, IOS devices are the most preferred platform among the users when downloading an app, taking up 39%, followed by Android devices, lower by just 1%, and on the website with 23% in total.
The final segment of the diagram revealed some most concerned languages on Duolingo by users time and again. Understandably, the majority of users plump for English, reached a record high with 44.5%. Likewise, users come down in favor of Spanish, French, and German, at 23.9%, 13.6%, and 8.7% respectively. Ultimately, a small group shows to have taken interest in studying Italian, as well as, Portuguese, account for 5.7% and 3.6% in sequence.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'show'?
Suggestion: show
...respectively. Ultimately, a small group shows to have taken interest in studying Ital...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, well, in fact, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11494252874 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88374187057 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1369184445 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20069917906 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941746493342 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252326622401 0.0843802449381 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136589234452 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181141199075 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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