Cause and Effect Fast Food
These days, most people - especially the youngster and kids in favor to eat fast food. Hamburgers, pizza, french fries, etc are available in the malls and supermarkets. Why it has become so popular? There are dozen of causes and effects on the popularity of fast-food restaurants and fast food.
The first cause is the need for a hectic lifestyle which has intensive activities. In a model family that has a spouse and a child, they both tend to have a job. Consequently, they do not have enough time to cook and frequency eat out, this activity increasing and gradually become a habit. Most people work full days with limited time to break, so fast food is a good choice because it is cheap, quick and convenient.
Secondly, fast-food restaurant companies improve their products and services are also considered as the cause of their popularity. These companies enhancing their food quality in diverse and mouth-watering taste. For example, Lotteria is an original fast-food brand in Korea, but when they approach the customers in Vietnam, they offer a special menu which suitable for the taste of Vietnamese people. These restaurants also provide good services such as quick service, convenient sit-down place, and even funny entertainment. Moreover, because this is a competing industry, a lot of restaurants also provided free delivery services which consumers can just call to order.
Besides its popularity, fast food has some effects on human health. There is no such thing as “bad” food, but there are some foods you should try not to have on a regular basis. Most fast food contains high in sodium, saturated fat, trans fat, and cholesterol, it isn’t something we should eat often. Eating too much over a long period of time can lead to issues such as high blood pressure, heart disease, and unwanted weight gain and even cancer.
In conclusion, the lifestyle of modern people, food quality and good services are some caused for the popularity of the fast-food industry. Besides its popularity, fast food affects human health. No one can deny the attractive display of fast-food, but eating with a suitable perfect amount can decrease the risk of disease.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...Why it has become so popular? There are dozen of causes and effects on the popularity...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... eat often. Eating too much over a long period of time can lead to issues such as high blood p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07799442897 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71767051437 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559888579387 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6350583458 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457461480453 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147792606804 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176172530729 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280906455752 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126995273143 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...Why it has become so popular? There are dozen of causes and effects on the popularity...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... eat often. Eating too much over a long period of time can lead to issues such as high blood p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07799442897 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71767051437 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559888579387 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6350583458 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457461480453 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147792606804 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176172530729 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280906455752 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126995273143 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.