The provided diagram elucidates the production of chocolate. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there is a total of 10 stages to manufactured chocolate. The process starts with cacao trees and ends up with the inner part pressed.
To begin with, red pods from cacao trees that are grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia are riped. Then, pods are harvested to receive white cacao beans which are fermented after the harvesting. After being fermented, white beans will be spread under the sunshine to dry all of the beans. Subsequently, dried beans are put in large sacks and then transported by train or lorry to the factory. Next, beans will be roasted, then put in the grinder to crush all of the beans and remove the outer shell of the beans. Eventually, crushed beans are pressed by the inner part of the machine and the liquid chocolate is produced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ill be spread under the sunshine to dry all of the beans. Subsequently, dried beans are pu...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...asted, then put in the grinder to crush all of the beans and remove the outer shell of the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85620915033 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53971823999 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6216388135 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0176528019666 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00859420137152 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243080722747 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0102813772428 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102813772428 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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