Essay topics:
International visitors to New Zealand: reason for visit
The line graph compares international tourists to New Zealand and the cause of travel to. it's obvious that the highest percent of people's aim to visit is walking with 85%. and after that with a few fewer percent is sightseeing. then the chart shows fell sharply from 75 percent to 45 percent for the third reason is visiting volcanos and continue boating increase 5% than before the reason for the trip and the last purpose is visiting museums.
as a result: all people to have a journey, enjoy doing outdoor activities more than indoor activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...oples aim to visit is walking with 85%. and after that with a few fewer percent is ...
^^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...ith a few fewer percent is sightseeing. then the chart shows fell sharply from 75 pe...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...the last purpose is visiting museums. as a result: all people to have a journey,...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, third, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 456.0 965.302439024 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 95.0 196.424390244 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.12198564135 3.73543355544 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47281059602 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705263157895 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 132.3 283.868780488 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.851947146 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274690293992 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10513234442 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105300915608 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153756606966 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153756606966 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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