Birth Rates In China and the USA

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Birth Rates In China and the USA

The graph below shows birth rates in China and the USA, over the period shown, It is clear that both had fluctuated dramatically.

China's birth rate rose from around the 1920s to 1930s had 10 percent and after this, it increased swiftly to an uppermost over 80 years. Then it decreased steadily at around 1955s 1970s under 10 percent and remained at this level until the last year of this period.

Meantime in the first the US birth as same as China's birth, however, it fell sharply to 5 percent in 1935 to 1940 and continued to 1945, howbeit it increased rapidly to highest 20 percent in 1950 and after that, it fell dramatically to beneath 10 percent till the 2000s.

Epilogue, both of them had a descending rate and more specific after 1950 they had similar trends.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61594202899 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33148725243 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3337384885 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298630408825 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165258360003 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136346890178 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184310324816 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124446503863 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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