The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011.
The line graph gives information about how many residents from various regions lived in Australia during the period from 1976 to 2011.
Overall, the total number of immigrants in Australia increased dramatically until the end of the period after seeing a continual decrease. It is also clear that there was an upward trend in the number of UK residents, whereas Asia and other areas showed a reverse pattern.
In 1976, 14 million British residents lived in Australia as opposed to about 6 million of Asian ones, after which the former experienced a continuous fall to merely 5 million people in 2011 while the latter saw an opposite change, growing to hit its highest point of 15 million people.
In comparison, starting at roughly 11 million people migrating from other regions of the world, the figure for this group dropped by nearly 3 million in 1986, but then went up noticeably to just under 15 million in the next 20 years before ending at approximately 13 million people at the end of the period. In general, the total population of immigrants in Australia declined constantly from 23 million to 19 million in the first two decades, followed by a dramatic rise to peak at 25 million fifteen years later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...illion people at the end of the period. In general, the total population of immigr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88942307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6217356076 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3389014754 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304634955863 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149294127185 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124545592537 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196138605603 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12654469085 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.