the line charts compare how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a car from 200 to 2012
Given is the line chart illustrating information about the amount of time which 3 different companies need to produce a car over the period of 10 years since 2000. In general, it is evident that Toyota spent the time to make a car was the least. Besides, the figures for 3 different groups increased from 2000 to 2012.
As can be seen from the line chart, Toyota was the company need the least time to produce a car, with under 20 days in 2000 and this number was witnessed a slight rise to above 20 days after 4 years. in 2012, there was reached the bottom at close to 10 days for Toyota to make a car.
According to Ford, this group was needed under 30 days to finish a car in 2000. The next 4 years of this period, there are seen a significant rise to nearly 10 days, almost 4 times compared with this number of at the end of the periods. The last group - Honda, in which the figure was seen a slight increase from close 30 to close 40 days in the first 6 years of the period and unchanged in the next 2 years before reducing to 35 at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08133971292 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15651204905 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7111692123 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190597456496 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987668486988 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506238997889 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155770048756 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738616510744 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.68 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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