The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013

The line graph highlights how many tourists visited popular museums including British, Science and Natural History museums from June to September 2013.

Overall, it can be seen that there was a considerable upward trend in the destination of British museum. On the whole, scientific places such as Science and Natural history museums are not as popular as British.

In terms of British museum come top of the list with 600 tourists visited in June. At the beginning of the month, the British Museum was a rose significantly until July with around 750. Following this, the figure fell slightly to 500 visitors in August, after which the number of tourists increase slightly to an average of 650 in September.

By contrast, the tourist of the Natural History Museum (NHM) went in the opposite direction. Science and Natural History museums are the next destinations with 400 and around 550 or these places chosen by tourists respectively. NHM was third at 300 in August while there was a significant fluctuation in the last two months to around just under 500, which mean that it has chosen far less than other destinations.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, such as, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03191489362 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65324779411 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.716892605 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147620489797 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066745150276 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685723650469 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110142760522 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848669641964 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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