Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Happiness and fun times have every single people in their life. Some people believe that adulthood has joyful events during their life more than the teenager period. However, I do not think because this time has a pure situation and they have no responsibility. Following this, I will discuss and give my opinions in this essay.
To begin with, adults may not feel happy with some problems. Firstly, adults have more responsibilities and duties on their shoulders such as family, education support. Secondly, in the adult stage, they do not have to rely on their financial side. Moreover, they are entirely free from taking their own decisions. Despite having freedom, at 20 years old and above, people become more responsible towards their goals. For instance, when a psychologist asked elders, most of them recalled their funny times and unforgettable memories from their childhood.
In addition, there are a few reasons due to which makes teenagers happy. Firs and foremost reason is the friend zone. Adolescents can spend their much time with friends as going to the club, playing video games on the internet. Furthermore, teenagers do have not any kind of trouble with finance, buying a house or car. A good example of this, teenagers of my country, most of them achieve veracity of goals and enroll in foreign universities when their parents support them.
To sum up, I pen down saying that, every people have different happiness time in their different part of life. Although, teenage times do not forget nobodies memories and unlimited satisfaction in that time. Undoubtedly, teenagers time is memorable for every human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14232209738 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66468280369 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0772743217 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256650193043 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795404312814 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644723419246 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160516853051 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634237180085 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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