The line graph below provide information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010

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The line graph below provide information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010

The provided graphic demonstrates the monthly revenue of four distinct restaurants of a city in the year 2010.

A first glance at the line graph reveals that while Spicy Fortune experienced a significant deceleration, the other counterparts namely Delicacy, Evening Paradise, and Grand Fiesta registered an inverse trend during the surveyed course.

As is shown in the chart, it is manifest that Spicy Fortune and Delicacy shared an analogous for the first ten months in that year. Specifically, both Spicy Fortune and Delicacy underwent a fluctuation before rising slightly to 140,000 dollars and 60,000 dollars respectively in October. In comparison to the statistic of the last three months in 2010, which saw a dramatic decrease to the trough with only around 50,000 dollars, that of Delicacy upsurged by exactly 120,000 dollars in December.

Turning to the other details, from January to July, Evening Paradise increased strongly by approximately 50,000 dollars whereas Grand Fiesta plummeted to 80,000 dollars. From August, while Grand Fiesta gained roughly 140,000 dollars, Evening Paradise decreased for a three-month course prior to hitting a notable acceleration to 190,000 dollars, exhibiting the highest income than all the other categories provided.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.625 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84609564433 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0029760982 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.285714286 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991427804631 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595106639324 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991536547377 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983808329272 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116009872443 0.0819641961636 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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