The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates, the information of, how the average monthly temperature varies in three different countries namely, Paris, Dubai, and Sydney over a year. Units are measured in temperature in degree Celsius.
Overall, it has been clear from the chart that, Dubai experiencing the highest temperature during July and August and this country was on top temperature among the given countries. While, Paris was the lowest temperature in most of the months though, peak temperature time was n July and august.
Sydney has the highest temperature from January to March which is, approximately 23 degree Celsius, while, the temperature plummet to around 13 degree Celsius in July. Whereas, after July, the trend shows upward and exceeding the temperature of Paris on September and increased to more than 20 degree Celsius by December. Moreover, in December, Sydney experiencing the highest temperature among other given countries.
In January, the temperature of Dubai was below 20 degree Celsius which went up on the following months reached at the peak on August and September with above 35 degree Celsius. Then, there was a slight decline in temperature and dramatically reached to around 21 degree Celsius in December. Similarly, Paris started the temperature with mere 5 degree Celsius and there was a noticeable surge in temperature on consecutive months, then touched to 20 degree Celsius during the month of July and august. Then the figure tumbled to the beginning Celsius with 5 degree.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ture of Paris on September and increased to more than 20 degree Celsius by Decemb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3179916318 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83792452057 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510460251046 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7372784842 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126180440329 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605709900118 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474742949958 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991205143708 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527438314213 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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