The line graph provides information about the fast food consumption of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, period of 25 years.
Overall, the consumption of fish and chips downward trend during period of time while the consumption of pizza and hamburger upward trend over the period.
We can see this line graph, in 1975, the most popular fast food was fish and chips. Namely, in this year, teenagers being eaten 100 times a year. Then, the figure showed gradual decline to about 87.000 in 1985 and continued to decrease to the end of the period, reaching around 40.000 in 2000.
Pizza and hamburgers of consumption was about 12.000 at the beginning of period and both of them continued to rose steadly during the next 20 years. In that year, two lines were around 80.000 in 1995 and pizza hamburgers stood at that was unchangeble the end of the year. The number of pizza and humburger were about 80.000 and 100.000 at the end of the period respectively.
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...gers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, period of 25 years. Over...
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...en 1975 and 2000, period of 25 years. Overall, the consumption of fish a...
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...of fish and chips downward trend during period of time while the consumption of pizza and hamb...
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...amburger upward trend over the period. We can see this line graph, in 19...
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...eriod, reaching around 40.000 in 2000. Pizza and hamburgers of consumption...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42978931881 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8816169602 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172842047564 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092602980417 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117837164576 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145037349095 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146161149844 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.