In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays, buying a house is the most important insteant of renting one for some countries' people. It is clear that the case has advantage and I will explain it.
First reason of the situation is renting payment being much high rather than buying one in certain period for residents. The case is happened by expensive renting payment where in megapolise and the near city center. For example, Tashkent where is the capital of Uzbekistan is more expensive than other cities and owning a home is more prapare than renting one for people who is going to live much time. According to the reason which owning home is important for residants.
Secondly, many people who have enough money to buy a home use it for earning money as a hotel or a hostel. Which is why migrants and students get renting a house during business and education period, people who have a renting house get money every month and itis the one of the most beneficial sites of business. For instance, I use renting when I go to tashkent and the situation demands much money from me. Earning is the reason to buy private a home being very important for people in some countries.
To conclude, although these positive sites, it is comfortable for local people and renting is more prapare choice for migrants and students. I think that increasing owning accomadition rate is the best situation for countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79831932773 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51537185007 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2078191808 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367449488711 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142064004997 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646152306888 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221006808216 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359190013836 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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