The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The given line chart illustrates how many visits to Australia each year by foreigners over a period from 1975 to 2005, and the table depicts the number of visitors in terms of different nations they came from.
Overall, it is obvious that travelers to Australia increased significantly during the given period. Besides, Japan was the country that has the highest visitors in most years.
Regarding the line graph, starting at about 10 million people in 1975, the figure for overseas citizens visiting Australia rose tremendously to approximately 15 million people in 1985. The statistics of abroad inhabitants traveling to Australia climbed to about 25 million people in 1995, further rising to a peak of more than 30 million people in the final year.
Concerning the table, standing at the largest number of 3.2 million people in the initial year, Japan saw a soar to 12 million people in 2005. South Korea ranked second with 2.9 million people visiting Australia in 1975. After 30 years, the data of South Korea remained the second-highest travelers at 9.1 million. The remaining nations accounted for more or less than 1 million people in 1975. Those countries experienced minimal growth at the end of the year. There were 8.8 million inhabitants who came from all over the world to travel to Australia, this figure grew substantially to 30.4 million in 2005.
The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The given line chart illustrates how many visits to Australia each year by foreigners over a period from 1975 to 2005, and the table depicts the number of visitors in terms of different nations they came from.
Overall, it is obvious that travelers to Australia increased significantly during the given period. Besides, Japan was the country that has the highest visitors in most years.
Regarding the line graph, starting at about 10 million people in 1975, the figure for overseas citizens visiting Australia rose tremendously to approximately 15 million people in 1985. The statistics of abroad inhabitants traveling to Australia climbed to about 25 million people in 1995, further rising to a peak of more than 30 million people in the final year.
Concerning the table, standing at the largest number of 3.2 million people in the initial year, Japan saw a soar to 12 million people in 2005. South Korea ranked second with 2.9 million people visiting Australia in 1975. After 30 years, the data of South Korea remained the second-highest travelers at 9.1 million. The remaining nations accounted for more or less than 1 million people in 1975. Those countries experienced minimal growth at the end of the year. There were 8.8 million inhabitants who came from all over the world to travel to Australia, this figure grew substantially to 30.4 million in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below shows the number of annual visits...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f origin where the visitors came from. The given line chart illustrates how many v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, second, so, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.046875 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64718121015 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4718531597 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367836794504 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1550076206 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172253383555 0.0843802449381 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292802763404 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.248397268005 0.0819641961636 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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