the line graph : channel one news viewing figures.
The line graph elucidates the number of viewing figures of channel one news from January to December. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable fluctuation of viewing figures occurred at 11 p.m. and is measured in millions of viewers per day.
To begin with, January to May witnessed a significant upsurge in the number of individuals who watched news at 09.30 p.m., and sharply over the following 7 months, it faced a palpitation which finished at just above 3 millions. Following the same pattern as viewer at 09.30 p.m., the amount of viewer at 6 p.m. also experienced a gradual oscillation between January, which was at just beneath 5 millions, and November, which made up at just over 3 millions, and erratically, it uplifted moderately in the following month.
In contrast, the amount of viewer at 1 p.m., over the whole period remained stable, and ended at well beyond 1 millions in December. Nonetheless, May to August saw dramatic progress in the total of viewer at 11 p.m., and all of sudden, it plunged tremendously in the next 4 months to achieve at just less than 1 millions in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80829015544 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8197193959 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8716160226 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.666666667 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.23603664747 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10850227036 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976920923899 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182163018415 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112301727732 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146372296715 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.